Walt Whitman's journal reveals what Whitman thought about when writing his poetry. It can be assumed from looking at the journal that Whitman was a scatter brain as there are various types of text in the journal such as notes of appointments, written poetry with slashes through some works, and visual images of Whitman's self. There appears to be various notes of appointments that he needed to hold in the front of the journal. His slanted writing throughout the journal can represent the fact that he did not formally his education and educated himself before moving on to teach students. The text is controversial in the time it was written as it questions religion, discovery (ships), and freedom. Many times in the journal, the word "libertad" appears and represents Whitman's ideals about society of equality is stressed throughout his writing. In addition, the drawings towards the end of the journal represent what Whitman may have visualized himself as a facilitator of peace, change, and equality within the United States.
After reviewing what Whitman actually wrote in his journal. I still find him to be a scatterbrain. He writes what he thinks, but then is seemingly able to connect his ideas to each other. When not being able to clearly make out what is written in the journal, the language seems unconnected, but when looking at the analysis and receiving greater understanding of the historical context, one is able to see that Whitman's writing is truly an extended metaphor for the events that happen in life. I think that not knowing what Whitman truly intended when writing and drawing in his journal allows the audience to imagine why Whitman made these decisions.
I appreciate how you looked at the big and little picture, and the details and support you provided as you processed and analyzed the journal- I do wish you had pulled a bit more from the journal in order to strengthen your response!
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